The warmth at the base of her skull became a brief, bright heat.
Then the timer hit zero, and the window closed, and the vessel swung silently behind the terminator line.
The crawler was very quiet.
Ravi exhaled. Henrik ran a diagnostic on the antenna array without being asked. Nikhil sat back down slowly, as though his legs had only just remembered how to do it.
“Are you all right?” Ravi asked Deirdre.
She was sitting with her back against the hull panel, legs folded, both hands in her lap. She looked tired in a way that had nothing to do with sleep. “The implant is… different,” she said. “The predictions are different now. More layered. Like it’s been given new data to work with and it hasn’t finished sorting it.”
“Different how?”
She thought for a long moment. “Before, it showed me the next few seconds. The most probable immediate future. Now it’s showing me… longer arcs. Possibilities that branch. I can see multiple versions of the next conversation we’re going to have.” She paused. “All of them involve Nikhil saying something I don’t expect.”
Nikhil looked up from his display. His expression was unreadable, and then it was not. “The vessel responded,” he said. “Before the window closed. Not through the antenna array. Through you. Through the implant directly.” He turned the secondary display so the others could see it. The signal log showed a burst of structured data at the two-second mark—arriving not from the antenna but from the FPI’s own internal logging port, as though the implant had received and recorded something without Deirdre’s conscious involvement.
“What is it?” Henrik asked.
“I don’t know yet,” Nikhil said. “But it’s structured. It has grammar. Whatever they sent in nineteen days of silence, they sent all of it in two seconds, the moment she demonstrated comprehension.”
Deirdre pressed her hand to the back of her neck again. The warmth was still there, low and constant, like a engine running at idle. The implant was sorting. Processing. The predictions it was feeding her were longer now, more complex, branching in directions she had no names for yet.
She thought about the cost. The FPI had been calibrated for her neurology over fourteen months. Whatever the vessel had pushed through it in those two seconds had not been calibrated for anything. It had simply arrived, and the implant had absorbed it, and now the implant was not quite the same device it had been an hour ago. She did not know yet what that meant for her. She suspected she would spend a long time finding out.
But the data was there. All of it. Nineteen days of silence, compressed into two seconds, now resident in a small ceramic-and-graphene device at the base of her skull, waiting to be understood.
“Seventeen hours,” Ravi said quietly, looking at the orbital clock.
“Seventeen hours,” Nikhil confirmed. He was already pulling the data structure apart, layer by layer, with the careful hands of someone who understood that the most important thing you could do with something irreplaceable was not to rush it.
Henrik began recalibrating the antenna array for the next window. Ravi poured water from a thermos and set a cup beside Deirdre without comment.
She picked it up. Held it. The implant showed her the steam rising from the surface before it rose.
Beyond the crawler’s hull, Ceth IV turned slowly in its orbit, indifferent and ancient, and somewhere on the dark side of its terminator line, a vessel the color of lichen drifted in its long, patient arc, carrying whatever it had always been carrying, waiting for the next eleven minutes when it could continue the conversation it had finally, after nineteen days, managed to begin.
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